My only suggestion is that an editor give it a read before the election season heats up (will we ever say "the election season is sufficiently heated?"):
I am a graduate of
Oakland Mills High Schooland hold a bachelor’s degree in sociology from the Universityof Marylandat , from the University of Baltimore School of Law. College Park
I applaud her for linking the bills/laws/source of great gnashing of teeth CB 58 and 59 to her site. I think that shows some respect for the intelligence of the electorate that is not necessarily common in local politics.
UPDATE: Looks like the site has received some edits. A neighborly hello to the "Friends of Jen":
I appreciate your readership, but may I suggest you "read it out loud"? I think you want it to say "AND a law degree..." Just trying to help.I am a graduate of Oakland Mills High School and hold a bachelor’s degree in sociology from the University of Maryland at College Park, a law degree from the University of Baltimore School of Law.